Is it a good way to capture Joseph Kony by Making Him Famous?
My name is Seongmin Jeong. Now, I will write about Joseph Kony. Do you know Joseph Kony? Many people don't know about Joseph Kony. He is a crimnal who kidnapped kids and turn them into soldiers. He give arms to kids. He lets kids to kill even their parents. How many kids do you think he kidnapped? 1000 kids? 2000 kids? No, he kidnapped about 30,000 kids. He is the worst criminal n the world. He was born in Uganda in 1961, November 18th. He is in LRA, Lord's Resistance Army. Then, do you know Kony 2012? It is a video made for the purpose of letting people to know about Joseph Kony. If he became famous, they think it's easy to capture him. Jason Russell made this video. Do you think it is a good way to capture Joseph Kony? I think it is a bad way to do this to capture him. This doesn't mean he is a bad person. I'll tell you why it is not a good way to make him famous.
First, it costs too much to paste all posts. To make him famous, people paste posts. People paste a lot of posts on the wall. That takes huge amount of money. If we didn't catch him, it is just waste of money. We can just tell not by pasting the posts, or we could paste a little not to waste money. I think pasting the post is not a good way.
Second, does making him famous help catching him? Even Josh Russell made video, does everybody know about Joseph Kony? I think making him famous will not help us catch him. Even Kony 2012 was made, he is still not famous. That means that everybody are not interested in Joseph Kony and we need to think another way to catch Joseph Kony. I hope Joseph Kony will get caught, but I think there is another way to catch Joseph Kony.
These are my two reasons why I think making him famous is not a good way to catch him. I know that he is a bad person. He needs to be caught, but I think making him famous will not help catching him. I think catching him is a very important job to do. I think people need to get interested in catching him and just knowing Joseph Kony is not important. Even if he is not famous, it is hard to catch, but even if he is famous, it would be just the same. This was my essay. What do you think? Do you think it is a good thing to make him famous?
This is a good essay. Your structure is good but you also need to include the opposing ideas and a rebuttal for them. You should also include the "Kony 2012" video as well. Good luck!
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